初一的英語作文
因為本人笨不會寫
請大家幫忙下作者: p1ngy 时间: 2009-2-2 14:14
提示: 作者被禁止或删除 内容自动屏蔽作者: 白小白 时间: 2009-2-2 14:16
嗷.....鱼大真是舍己为人作者: 鱼大吉 时间: 2009-2-2 14:24
舍己为人这个成语用不到我身上吧?反正我也是长得像初中生嘛,就当一回初中生嘛作者: 美人帐下跳着舞 时间: 2009-2-3 00:29
The spring festive is a bit special for me. I had a wonderful time.We didn't stay at home but had a travel and order a rich feast /dinner in a restaurant.Though it was very much expensive,We could spare much effort preparing the dinner which we couldn't have eaten and also we could have a lot of time to enjoy ourselves.You see, nowadays, the living standard has been greatly improved,eating is not so much a problem as before,so we have to find other kind of ways to enjoy ourselves.Traveling is a good way of spending the traditional festivals.We went to Xishuangbaina,Dali,the Stone Forest...my family are all excited, learning a lot about the Minorities' tradition.I wish one day I could go abroad to spend the festival if we could make enough money!作者: 美人帐下跳着舞 时间: 2009-2-3 00:41 本帖最后由 美人帐下跳着舞 于 2009-2-5 01:40 编辑
31 January 2009
Dear Anna:
Spring Festival is a traditional day for the Chinese people.We makes many wishes in this day. My dream is simple. I hope my family will be happy forever and my mother is healthy.No matter what job I do,I can only hope so.Maybe I should have a great wish.But in fact,having a happy family and a health body is my biggest dream！ So ,to achave this dream,I will study hard to make my parents happy.
呵呵，这个不是我写的，只是受某人之托，用来抛砖引玉。
你这么强，很多“语法错误和用词不当”的文章当然入不了你的法眼，你帮着写一篇又何妨。让我们也来看看“没有语法错误，没有用词不当”的文章到底是什么样的。作者: 鱼大吉 时间: 2009-2-5 08:52
楼上的,辛苦了,哈哈.作者: 鱼宝宝 时间: 2009-2-5 11:41 作者: Betty汤 时间: 2009-2-5 12:01
The first day of the spring festival this year is as normal as before. In the early morning, my mother and I went to the temple for worship. It was so many people that we couldn't move quickly.I even couldn't breath because of the smell in it. After that, we had a dinner in the temple. It was full of vegetables instead of meat. My mother told me that the food of the temple could clean our bodies.I wondered whether it could help or not. Four hours later, we left to the supermarket and bought some food. Finally, we went home and I felt too tired to move . So I think next year I won't go out with my mother anymore.
这是我前年的痛苦经历...可能还存在着问题，部分词语不太会用。作者: Betty汤 时间: 2009-2-5 12:06 17#美人帐下跳着舞
美人...我是高中英语的短文改错题做太多了...很无奈...那时候硬要找错来改滴...
我们网有很多漂洋过海的，他们写的才可能真正没语法错误的啦~~作者: 鱼大吉 时间: 2009-2-6 14:26
两位辛苦了,谢谢...可惜我都看不懂.,作者: 蘿卜 时间: 2009-2-6 14:31
媽媽也······看到頭都大了~！！！I服了 you 看~！我也會用英語哎~！作者: 轻舞飞扬 时间: 2009-6-8 00:31
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哈哈~~真厉害~~看来以后有个难点的问题上来叫人代劳了~·哈哈作者: haopa 时间: 2009-6-8 10:12
我觉得初一的词汇量应该没这么大吧、作者: haopa 时间: 2009-6-8 10:13
英语作文是我英语唯一强项。作者: 美人帐下跳着舞 时间: 2009-6-8 11:36 24#轻舞飞扬 仰天大哭啊～
又不是我写的。5555555555
好歹是响应鱼大的号召，从网上找了篇，明显的错处也做了修改。其实并没有那些语法错误，全部顶格也是英语书信体规定的格式之一。
被MM这一说，
我对我多年的学习能力和判断能力都产生了质疑。
看来我学了十五六年的英语，
都白学了。作者: 鱼大吉 时间: 2009-6-8 11:48 这么老的贴子也翻出来了,我晕.
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仰天大哭啊～
这么老的贴子也翻出来了,我晕.
